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Be my suicide
My cyanide…
Kill me with your stare
Because life just ain’t fair
Scratch a death note, indents on the paper
Placed in your pocket, thought for later
See what love does to the restless
Pillow to my face, soon I’m breathless
Maybe that’s not the way to go
Pop some pills, take it slow
Measure the rope, round my neck
But it’s too short, just by a speck
Always my luck, so it seems
Wonder what death, really means
Will you care if I never again see the sun
Can I shoot myself with your shot gun
Think of me, when our song plays,
Or has your heart, seen better days
I could just sit on the tracks, wait for a train
But you’d just assume I was insane
Maybe I am, I don’t know
Love really makes the crazy show
Put the bullet in, then BAM!
Who needs life anyway, I’m all but damned
My cyanide…
Kill me with your stare
Because life just ain’t fair
Scratch a death note, indents on the paper
Placed in your pocket, thought for later
See what love does to the restless
Pillow to my face, soon I’m breathless
Maybe that’s not the way to go
Pop some pills, take it slow
Measure the rope, round my neck
But it’s too short, just by a speck
Always my luck, so it seems
Wonder what death, really means
Will you care if I never again see the sun
Can I shoot myself with your shot gun
Think of me, when our song plays,
Or has your heart, seen better days
I could just sit on the tracks, wait for a train
But you’d just assume I was insane
Maybe I am, I don’t know
Love really makes the crazy show
Put the bullet in, then BAM!
Who needs life anyway, I’m all but damned
Literature
Goth
"Don't act goth" you yell at me.
"That's not the way you want to be"
But what if it is I think I like it.
I don't care even if you hate it.
I am who I am and I always will be.
I like the way I am. Why can't you see?
You think yellin will make it go away?
That only makes me want it to stay.
You think I am wrong and you are right.
You want me to change, to "see the light"
I will not do that I will not change.
My life is mine, not yours to rearange.
I love the dark and hate the light.
I don't care if it's wrong or right.
I hope one day that you will see
this isn't a phase. I'm being me.
You can hate me I really don't mind.
Just
Literature
EMO
She's simple not complex. She's cute not gorgeous. She's smart not brainy. But because she's just average she's invisible.
When she hurts no one sees.
When she bleeds no one cares.
When she cries no one hears.
She's gentle not rough. She's kind not cruel. She's sweet not mean. Because of this she blends in with the crowds.
When she loves no one cares.
When she sighs no one hears.
When she smiles no one sees.
She's dark not bright. She's quiet not loud. She's sad not happy. She's EMO, she's nonexistent but constantly ridiculed.
Literature
Notes From A Psychopath...
For it is you that
I thoroughly despise
So I just sit back
And plan your demise
You may know, you may not
Know how much I loath thee,
It's no apparent thought
Just an unaimed idea
Do you think I'm insane?
I am most certainly not
You seem too vain...
Is that part of you're plot?
Au revoir, goodnight
It's too late to tell
For you see I must return
To my holding cell
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Yeah, I kinda like it. The first few lines don't match the way the rest of the poem flows. Hmm... I also like the begining tho. idk.
So this is sorta like crazy ex-girlfriend wanting the bf back, but like when he says no she comes up with all these suicidal notes to give him, to make him feel guilty.
Sorta. lol.
But it can be what ever your heart desires, so tell me what u think please. I'd rly love 2 kno.
Oh and also, the part:
'Will you care if I never again see the sun
Can I shoot myself with your shot gun
Think of me, when our song plays,
Or has your heart, seen better days'
It's sorta read as a question so like: 'Will you care if I never again see the sun? Can I shoot myself with YOUR shot gun? [or] Think of me when our song plays? Or has your heart seen better days?'
Yeah, hope u understand that.
I might do like another version of this eventually. That goes a totally diffrent direction. But i'm not sure yet.
Plz commet
It would mean the world to me!
xoxo
Dove
ps. I changed the words just a little with the suggestions of
and 
I'm not sure if line 16 is any better. I wasn't sure what to do with it. So I just changed the begining. So if you have some suggesttions, just comment me
So this is sorta like crazy ex-girlfriend wanting the bf back, but like when he says no she comes up with all these suicidal notes to give him, to make him feel guilty.
Sorta. lol.
But it can be what ever your heart desires, so tell me what u think please. I'd rly love 2 kno.
Oh and also, the part:
'Will you care if I never again see the sun
Can I shoot myself with your shot gun
Think of me, when our song plays,
Or has your heart, seen better days'
It's sorta read as a question so like: 'Will you care if I never again see the sun? Can I shoot myself with YOUR shot gun? [or] Think of me when our song plays? Or has your heart seen better days?'
Yeah, hope u understand that.
I might do like another version of this eventually. That goes a totally diffrent direction. But i'm not sure yet.
Plz commet
It would mean the world to me!
xoxo
Dove
ps. I changed the words just a little with the suggestions of
and I'm not sure if line 16 is any better. I wasn't sure what to do with it. So I just changed the begining. So if you have some suggesttions, just comment me
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nice poem, is kinda sad and dark, i rly like it